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Suicide
Contributed by
putteragain
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Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 12:03:33 PM in AEST
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SadPoetry
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tarnished soul reaching out
shaky hands holding on to nothing
screaming loud nobody hears
dog collar to end his life
weeping family left behind
addiction the killer again
life so young to hate
with out God she would die too
a message to be heard
for those who will listen
sadness overwhelms
when you are alone
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putteragain
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2004-06-14 12:03:33]
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Re: Suicide
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by wyrd_faerie on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 12:27:32 PM AEST
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Re: Suicide
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by shelby on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 12:33:20 PM AEST
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haunting I know this well just lost a friend there is nothing that will make sense of any of it its so hard touching write
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Re: Suicide
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 12:47:29 PM AEST
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this is so sad michelle, im so sorry for your loss....... hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Suicide
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by Black13 on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 10:32:48 PM AEST
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Very good write Michelle.
Very powerful.
It was written perfectly for this.
Ouch... It does sound incredibly painful though. I'm sorry for your loss. |
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