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I Love Her
Contributed by
slayer_015
on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 11:46:40 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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The curvature of her slender form,
Bleeds onto the white wall,
As her silent apparition follows,
Her every nimble movement.
I watch this with delight from the mirror,
I think her body perfect in every way,
I see her muscles pulse,
I see her nose flair in her lobors,
I love her.
She sees me and smiles,
I melt,
My soul is shaken,
I am lost within that smile,
She turns her gaze from me,
I am released.
I stare at her body again,
It is to me no less grand,
Than that of Aphrodite herself.
I see her as my equal,
I see her as a mother,
I see her as my lover,
I see her as my soulmate,
I see her as my wife.
And though she remains all of these,
She is most of all my friend.
She sees me again,and laughs,
I melt again,
For I feel she has guessed my thoughts,
Even though they are hidden in the lockbox,
Of my longing soul.
I watch her walk to me,
And see the translucent drops of sweat,
Trickle down her golden skin,
To the dark places of pleasure,
I yearn to be near.
I feel her soft kiss and warm embrace,
As she gently urges my stone legs,
Backwards to the bedroom lightswitch.
I feel her against me,
I feel her quickened heart,
Beating,beating,beating.
The lights are turned off,
And in the blackness,
We are one,
I love her,
All of her,
Mind,body,and soul,
I love her.
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slayer_015
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2004-06-14 11:46:40]
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Re: I Love Her
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by pixie on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 11:49:19 AM AEST
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beautiful
pixie xx |
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Re: I Love Her
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by RhythmBndt on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 11:49:49 AM AEST
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*SIGH* Being in love is such a wonderful thing :)
Great write. |
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Re: I Love Her
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by wyrd_faerie on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 12:04:49 PM AEST
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| stunning...so beautiful... |
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Re: I Love Her
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by shelby on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 12:37:25 PM AEST
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this is breath taking sooooooo beautiful love is whats its all about
michelle |
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Re: I Love Her
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by freespirit on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 01:06:38 PM AEST
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If this was written for your lady
than Id say that she sure is lucky to have you love her God Bless |
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Re: I Love Her
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 01:09:59 PM AEST
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absolutely beautiful, made my heart smile warmly:) hugs n' love nessa
@->>->:- |
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Re: I Love Her
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by PumpkinPie on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 03:47:56 PM AEST
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Wow, I sure hope as hell you showed this to her,she'd probably melt in your arms in a split second..You write beautiful love poems filled with verses of words so vivid to the imagination,how sweet is that,you got me longing for writes like these.Very good write,
Pumpkinpie |
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Re: I Love Her
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by NoahsARK on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 11:08:22 AM AEST
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| This is a very nice poem I loved it. It was so sweet and best wishes for you and your gurl! |
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Re: I Love Her
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by Belinda on
Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 03:12:42 PM AEST
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| Jesus! I think I love her!! Joking, you really remind us all that husbands can love as passionatly as any young lover! Thanks it was a wonderful read. |
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Re: I Love Her
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by anonymussme on
Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 04:37:31 PM AEST
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| i wish my boyfriend would write something like this to me :-P awsome poem |
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