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Depressive Creation
Contributed by
lost_word
on
Wednesday, 16th October 2002 @ 09:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Pictures recover the past known as happy
Present thoughts reveal
what i now know as sad
Sitting here i wonder
what the future may hold
A lonely tear trickles
The night sky grows cold
Bitter sweet dreams only add to how i feel
But the dreams arent dreams at all
The rage is all too real
Undying depression lurks
and creeps throughout my mind
It's nightfall once again
I just lay here and cry
I feel you looking down on me
and i know it's with love
I'll show that love right back
with a kiss to the sky above
Copyright ©
lost_word
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2002-10-16 21:45:00]
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Re: Depressive Creation
(User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on
Saturday, 26th October 2002 @ 11:49:51 PM AEST
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This is very heartfelt
Very good write
Keep em' Coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::. |
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Re: Depressive Creation
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by lost_word on
Monday, 28th October 2002 @ 08:22:27 AM AEST
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thank you, your the first person 2 leave a comment since i posted.
Brandon.....lost_word |
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Re: Depressive Creation
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by Roshie on
Sunday, 8th December 2002 @ 12:22:53 AM AEST
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| A beautiful write, keep em up! :) |
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