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Hidden Soul
Contributed by
SweetRhythm
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Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 10:20:30 AM in AEST
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Your like an abstract painting
That knows its value and meaning
But for someone else to feel you,
They really first must see you
I cannot say I've found you or I can see you all
But from the parts I have seen
I wish the others would call
Its not easy when parts are mysterous or even hidden away
Why do you want to be so abstact or even from us just stray?
There is one thing I'v noticed
Although you are not clear
You have got plenty of colour but your ways, they can be ever so severe
But just like the abstract painting, you truly are unique
For whatever way you are formed, is a way just so complete
And though we do not see you, exactly as you are,
I think under the right setting you are a shining star
So whatever happens, please do not despair
Because I can assure you,
That even though we cannot find you all,
We can appreciate you as something rare
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SweetRhythm
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Re: Hidden Soul
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by pixie on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 11:10:20 AM AEST
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great poem
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Re: Hidden Soul
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by shelby on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 12:50:06 PM AEST
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I love this I know someone so complex this poem fit to a tee wonderful
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Re: Hidden Soul
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by yellow_sundragon on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 05:43:52 PM AEST
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Sometimes those rare people just want to be treated as ordinary.....
This is another great poem, thanks for sharing....
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Re: Hidden Soul
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 10:11:47 AM AEST
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beautiful, the care you feel for this person is lovely:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Hidden Soul
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 05:02:07 PM AEST
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an interesting and thoughtfull write
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