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My Trip To Hell!
Contributed by
deathdrop
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Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 09:53:08 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Door, smile while you stand there.
Knowing I can’t reach you- it’s not fair!
For all I tried to build or make fell,
And now you’re laughing as you open doors to hell!
Here I stay frozen and afraid.
Nothing to hold on to, as this mist has been laid.
The devil watches me with a smile on his face,
As I cry, so helplessly stuck in this maze.
The night comes down so black and cold,
Falling down I feel weary and old.
Then bit by bit things unwind.
Until I hear endless echoes screaming in my mind.
Colors swirl when I come to.
And there are blood stains down the walls in my room.
But when I rise up I fall again.
Through the floor into deep pain.
I hear people shouting that I killed my family!
I cry fitting, moving onwards through insanity.
Until I reach a fiery bloodied world.
I find my-self floating, still feeling cold.
And below me I see millions of slaves,
And lightning storms and crashing WAVES,
And just as I’m feeling so alone,
The devil rises, and says “welcome home!”.
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Re: My Trip To Hell!
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by TheWordChirugeon on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 09:54:43 AM AEST
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| Hmm. An icy hell. Kind of reminds me of the Vikings. |
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Re: My Trip To Hell!
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by LiquidChaos on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 10:18:56 AM AEST
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creeepy....yeah i saw that verse in the forums and i was like...that's make a good poem...i gotta start turning my forum stuff into longer poems....
nice creepy write...gave me goosebumps!
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Re: My Trip To Hell!
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by pixie on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 11:12:07 AM AEST
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wow, this is a great write, take a bow :)
pixie xx |
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Re: My Trip To Hell!
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by shelby on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 12:51:50 PM AEST
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ok gave me chills dang it and it light outside!! Errie chilling write I like it I do!
Michelle |
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Re: My Trip To Hell!
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 10:47:05 AM AEST
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ewwww lol! what a poem:P ...very well written, my hair on my arms is standing up ty very muchly, hugs n' love nessa
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