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Flow of Bliss
Contributed by
Ethereal_Engine
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Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 09:23:52 AM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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On a day when your mind is blurred and out of focus, you begin to see things, amazing beautiful things. A fine mist of ever-changing color slowly takes over all that you can see becoming clearer every second. Your mind begins to think, "This can't possibly be real", but your vision is not the only sense experiencing the event. A feeling, like a light chill on a cool morning, causes your hairs to stand on end. It’s almost like a very low pulse of electricity is surging through your body, but just as everything becomes crystal clear, it vanishes, but the electric charge remains confirming the impossible.
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Re: Flow of Bliss
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by slayer_015 on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 09:50:52 AM AEST
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that was beautiful,great vision.
Brian |
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Re: Flow of Bliss
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by shelby on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 12:56:22 PM AEST
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your in tune with more than you realize incredible write
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Re: Flow of Bliss
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 01:00:17 PM AEST
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this is wonderful, i could feel it, great images and made me look out the window at the mists lol, hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Flow of Bliss
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by fallensilence on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 01:25:41 PM AEST
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| this is really good. i liked the way it flows. -david |
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Re: Flow of Bliss
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by deadreckoning1983 on
Monday, 16th August 2004 @ 02:19:55 AM AEST
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| this was very good and specific, because that chill/electric thing happens to me all the time!!! good job |
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