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Together
Contributed by
steven_fenton1982
on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 08:58:21 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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The love we share will never die.
Like two roses living on the same vine,
together we face the rain,
but together we will grow.
The love we feel will never fade.
Like two hearts beating on the same artery,
together we face the strain,
but together we will live.
If love is blind, then I stand accused,
but at least we stand together.
if life is fake, then i'll play the clown,
but we will always have the last laugh.
Yeah, they say that love is blind,
oh, it was fate that guided me to you.
But tonight I am blind to the world,
because all I see is you.
Copyright ©
steven_fenton1982
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2004-06-14 08:58:21]
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Re: Together
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by RhythmBndt on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 09:24:33 AM AEST
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| Nice use of metaphors :) Very good write :) |
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Re: Together
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by pixie on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 10:11:22 AM AEST
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awwww this is lovely
pixie xx |
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Re: Together
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by SweetRhythm on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 10:30:35 AM AEST
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Auh whoa that was so beautiful, it made my heart melt. Very well put togeter, real touch of love, remarkable. 5/5 for sure. I just loved it!
Corinna |
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Re: Together
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 11:28:11 AM AEST
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this ended so well, I won't bother with my other comments.
Nice work |
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