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Emaciate the Suffering
Contributed by
LiquidChaos
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Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 08:26:24 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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I think I’ve finally found a compromise
To all the disease trapped on the inside.
If I starve it from within
I will finally spill the sadness from my veins.
And maybe you’ll finally find happiness,
If I emaciate my flaws.
I promise I’ll only cause just one more scar.
If this illness dies from lack of substance
I can destroy it for good.
I can destroy me for good.
I can rid myself of all this insanity.
And maybe then your criticisms will run short.
I think I’ve finally found a compromise.
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Re: Emaciate the Suffering
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by pixie on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 09:02:27 AM AEST
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You are well on the road to recovery, this is a great poem, make the compromise and seek your happiness
takecare
Pixie xx |
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Re: Emaciate the Suffering
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by coldestflame on
Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 03:41:30 AM AEST
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| hey nice pome.. i likd it v much.. gr8 rite.. tc g |
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