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The Beauty of a Laceration
Contributed by
LiquidChaos
on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 08:20:24 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Beauty is found in lacerations.
The way the red flows so flawlessly
Mingling with the flow of despondency
Pulsating—resiliently with each heartbeat
Lingering within the walls of the wound.
For just a moment
Until the life overflows
To form rivers of scarlet
Flowing the extent of my forearm
Before gravity overcomes
One perfect drop falls to the floor,
Almost in slow motion
For I know that even as I spill all
That my body has struggled to create,
More is forged from deep within
Awaiting the day when it too
Shall know the pleasure of the fall.
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2004-06-14 08:20:24]
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Re: The Beauty of a Laceration
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by waos on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 11:43:30 AM AEST
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wow that was really really good. i love the thought in it, and of course since i agree with all your talk about lacerations being beautiful cause i do it too it makes it even better.
i can see it happening as i read your poem. good job. |
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Re: The Beauty of a Laceration
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by blackholesun on
Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 12:13:58 PM AEST
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hey i really thought that i related to that,im a
cutter so i also enjoy the beauty of a laceration,ps;come read my poetry,it hasnt been read 1 time yet! |
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