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Dreaming
Contributed by
eileenk
on
Wednesday, 16th October 2002 @ 09:15:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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Sleeping dreams
A product of the unconscious mind
Bring disappointment upon waking
I do often find
Waking dreams I like better
When staring at the sky
Picturing myself amongst the clouds
Watching the silly world go by
Flashbacks of dreams during the waking hours
A sense of de ja vu
A feeling of unreality devours
A vision coming true
As though it is a scene conjured in my mind
I have given life to
Copyright ©
eileenk
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2002-10-16 21:15:00]
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Re: Dreaming
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by shepdog1972 on
Saturday, 9th November 2002 @ 02:04:22 PM AEST
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Excellent! I just love this becouse i love my dreams...good or bad they are a part of you...we often interpret them(try to) the wrong way or we try to make them out to be something....well i just like my dreams the way they are!!!!!
thanks for shering....
john
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Re: Dreaming
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by Sarah22 on
Sunday, 8th December 2002 @ 12:17:07 AM AEST
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good poem
keep writing
in the future . |
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Re: Dreaming
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by Wrybod on
Wednesday, 5th February 2003 @ 12:12:23 PM AEST
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Third read ,altogether different
nice try at an elusive theme.
Tou caught it well/
Ihave day dreams but the ones I dread are those that sneak up and remind you of something pretty shabby that you did.
I have a few "waltzing in the clouds" reveries fron my flying days (RAF 1943-48) but there again you could only relax for a second or two
then an uninvited "guest" would drop in.
Nice one this, liked it, on too the next |
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