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The world
Contributed by
srugglingyoungster
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Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 06:32:45 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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People have become
the ignorance,
ignorance within and
among ourselves.
Dignity, preide and ego
are breaking down
and getting the best of us!
How could we
let this happen?
And we blame everyone else
for this problem!
When really, late at night
when your warm in bed,
you realize,
its just yourself.
The world today,
and tommorow as we
know it,
is ending.
People are too
self mutilated!
Tell today's youth this,
and tell them to let
their life long dreams
to slip by,
and then tell the why.
Cuz, people are ruining us
and the worl is going
yo eventually explode!
Copyright ©
srugglingyoungster
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2004-06-14 06:32:45]
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Re: The world
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by pixie on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 07:19:03 AM AEST
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good poem
pixie xx |
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Re: The world
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by Silent-No-More on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 08:54:28 PM AEST
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Um.... yeh... this one was a bit angry. *smile*
Not terribly so, however. I read it more as frustation - and I don't blame you for feeling that way. Sometimes it does really seem like the world's gone mad!
Very interesting write! Keep dumping those emotions onto the page.... it's good therapy!
-SNM |
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