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Snow Covered Rose
Contributed by
steven_fenton1982
on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 04:46:27 AM in AEST
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The sun has just melted,
the ocean is on fire.
The sky has just fallen,
and the world is so empty.
It's so silent here now,
nomore war, nomore hate.
It's so peaceful tonight,
freedom comes at a high price.
When the wind blows,
it don't find any taking lungs anymore.
When the night comes,
theres no-one to pick up the once
wished upon fallen stars.
And theres nothing left here,
but this snow covered rose.
Permanent winter all around,
one little flower still grows.
Snow covered rose.
Copyright ©
steven_fenton1982
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2004-06-14 04:46:27]
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Re: Snow Covered Rose
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by enigmatic_deadsy_whore on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 04:59:18 AM AEST
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Wow...Absolutely amazing...I can't stop reading it over and over again..
You have real talent =) |
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Re: Snow Covered Rose
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 05:15:07 AM AEST
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Wowie!!!
Brilliant poem here...
Very strong and powerful and
just breathtakingly beautiful...
I have to echo the last comment, I couldn't stop reading it over and over either...
wow...
Magnificent poem!
Loved it!
13 year old girl who wishes she could write like this,
_.:'~Katie~':._ |
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Re: Snow Covered Rose
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by pixie on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 07:26:10 AM AEST
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you have such a talent, keep em coming
pixie xx |
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Re: Snow Covered Rose
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by deadbloodyrose on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 02:41:43 PM AEST
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| this is an amazing poem.. very vivid.. i really like it .. AMI JO |
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