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Winter Clear
Contributed by
wray
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Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 12:36:51 AM in AEST
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(Imagine a glasshouse at night with rays of moonlight washing in, and outside is a frosty winter of blue-white snow.)
Every night I thought I felt the moonlight
Washing all this pain and grief away from me
But I can’t help but think about
The times you sat beside me and held my hand
I know that dream isn’t real anymore
But I saw you here, winter-clear, once before...
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wray
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2004-06-14 00:36:51]
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Re: Winter Clear
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by holderofthestone on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 01:27:46 AM AEST
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| very sad start here wray, you should finish it im intersted to see what you can do with it. I bet it would be as great as your others.... good start. |
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Re: Winter Clear
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 08:53:54 AM AEST
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very good write... I hope you finish it someday.
also the music is very pretty: *loving the fact that you gave us the midi to listen to* :)
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Re: Winter Clear
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by Avarice_Riot on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 09:34:18 AM AEST
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| I listened to the midi sample while I read this and I have to admit it certainly heighteins the reading experience. It's a beautiful piece of music, very sad but exactly something I would listen to. |
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