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Goodnight Kiss
Contributed by
JadedExistence
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Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 12:08:39 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Black eyes glowing with hate
Sobbing pleas coming to late
Bones breaking beneath his fist
Blood flowing from the lips he kissed
Head slamming into the wall
To the ground she starts to fall
Prayers whispered through blood stained lips
Fists land and blood drips
Swirling darkness consumes her mind
Light dimming, her stare is blind
Leaning down into the light
Gently he kisses her goodnight
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Re: Goodnight Kiss
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by sunnyrainbows on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 12:36:45 AM AEST
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i like the rhyming couplets....
kinda morbid, with the mentioning of blood
but then again, it's under dark poetry =) |
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Re: Goodnight Kiss
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by venkat on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 04:22:00 AM AEST
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| Dark yet very good read ..venkat |
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Re: Goodnight Kiss
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by srugglingyoungster on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 04:37:19 AM AEST
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| very good. i know its sounds sick an twisted but, i love the darkness within the poem and i got a clear picture right away. a big plus! |
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Re: Goodnight Kiss
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by pixie on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 08:41:57 AM AEST
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great read, you captured this well,
pixie xx |
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Re: Goodnight Kiss
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by bobotheclown on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 12:55:13 PM AEST
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wow this was amazing sounds like a scary dream you had, but it spawned some amazing poetry. It was good to see another thing by you. I loved the images in this poem
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Goodnight Kiss
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by lostinmyself on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 07:19:41 AM AEST
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Wow, nasty...
Great write. A brilliant poem.
I have had dreams like this and they are definatly not pleasant.
I love the style.
*hugs* Phil xxx |
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Re: Goodnight Kiss
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 24th March 2005 @ 09:00:35 AM AEST
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| Excellent poem.... truly dark & powerful.... loved it!!! |
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