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The Person in the Mirror
Contributed by
slackoffsamiam
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Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 11:05:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I gaze into the mirror and
Ask the figure "who am I?"
I think he knows and won't clue me in
It hurts to look into the mirror
Because I can only see what I once was
And what I've come to be
I want a total rehaul of everything
I am.
To be what I want to be
Though I don't know what that is
Who am... What am I?
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2004-06-13 23:05:09]
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Re: The Person in the Mirror
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by waos on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 11:07:52 PM AEST
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sweet stuff...definetely a 5/5 for rating. i really like the part that says "because i can only see what I once was, and what I've come to be"....
that's like what's been going on with me. thank you for posting that. |
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Re: The Person in the Mirror
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 11:14:55 PM AEST
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wow, very powerful...I do the same...I relate to this very much....this was great...I loved it...keep it up keep it coming...
read and comment my stuff if you want...I'd love to hear what you think...
much love,
Dani |
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Re: The Person in the Mirror
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by pixie on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 09:16:13 AM AEST
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i think we all ask ourselves these questions, I know I do, ... great poem,
pixie xx |
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Re: The Person in the Mirror
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 08:17:54 PM AEST
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great contemplation poem:) hugs n' love nessa
@->->>:- |
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Re: The Person in the Mirror
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by slackoffsamiam on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 08:24:33 PM AEST
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| If I had known that I could only submit three I would have chosen better ones, I like to start off strong, first impressions are whats most important |
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