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Not yet pass the day
Contributed by
corrupted_minds
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Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 09:39:55 PM in AEST
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Anxiety of whether to see tomorrow,
Or not yet pass the day,
My silent whimpers for your help,
Merely went astray,
I was beyond blue,
For all you knew,
I wasn’t even there,
Too long it’s been repressed,
Time to let life go,
Toying with my emotions,
This life has gone so low,
I was beyond blue,
For all you knew,
I wasn’t even there,
A silent scream brings the end,
The veil lifted from my eyes,
Angels come and greet me,
And erase all my cries,
I was beyond blue,
For all you knew,
I wasn’t even there,
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Re: Not yet pass the day
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by KSUHO11 on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 10:58:30 PM AEST
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| That poem made my heart hurt, it's so sad, i was sorry to read it, keep your head up and take care of yourself. |
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Re: Not yet pass the day
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by pixie on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 09:23:53 AM AEST
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this is very sad........but greatly written
pixie xx |
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