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Goodbye
Contributed by
pyrofairyburning
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Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 05:42:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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When I cry I think of your laughter
I feel your smile when I’m desperate for escape
I hear the wind and I know you’re breathing
The skies open up, and I know what you’re feeling
It’s dark out but I know where to reach for you
I’m all alone and I know that you’re there
I walk into the house and I know it was home
This is my last chance at hapiness
It's not very well that you're not here
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pyrofairyburning
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2004-06-13 17:42:30]
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Re: Goodbye
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by Archie on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 05:52:07 PM AEST
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This is a good poem. I reads as though the person you are talking to has passed away.
I hope that is not true. The poem is a very good read. |
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Re: Goodbye
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by waos on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 05:57:30 PM AEST
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| that was really good. i really like how you drew the analogies with nature...very cool |
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Re: Goodbye
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 06:08:04 PM AEST
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oooo, filled with loneliness, yearning and so vivid, great write:) hugs n' love nessa
@->>->:- |
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Re: Goodbye
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 07:28:34 PM AEST
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hello
this is very sad,but don't worry everything will be allright .good poem.
love,
andrea |
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Re: Goodbye
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 10:02:01 PM AEST
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yet a nother great write....keep it up keep it coming
much love,
Dani |
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