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ENVOKING MY OWN HELL
Contributed by
oneteartofellpain
on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 04:47:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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many people see me and judge me with out even knowing my name.
they see me and categorize me as something im not, with out knowing the worst part of my life.
i have nothing to hold onto nothing to call my own.
last night i layed awake...thinking about my sweet
death.waiting upon dawn to take those pills...
something stopped me dont know exaclty what...
i got up and cried like the coward i am...
noticeing that i couldnt do it...i fell to the floor with a shattered heart shaking and cryin got my blade and carved in me something ill never forget...feeling the blood rushing down my wrists...holding on to my last breath i sighed...fell to the floor n saw my childhood flash across my eyes...
i saw my mother crying wishin for my to come back
seeing my father pleeding for forgiveness n telling me he loved me...
seeing my sister and brother holding my life-less body...finally laying in my own doom....
...i woke up in a white room with people around my starring and pointing at me....i saw my wrists n saw the stiches...i dont regret what i did...for every scar has its own hidden tale...
this one shows u where i gave up where my cries didnt satisfy n burned my skin...
where the blade indeed went in too deep...
n where i cried my self to what i thought would be my last sleep...
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2004-06-13 16:47:09]
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Re: ENVOKING MY OWN HELL
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by screwup on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 05:16:13 PM AEST
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god that was good. it sounds just like me... :(
i really loved it. keep them coming and don't be afraid to pm me. |
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Re: ENVOKING MY OWN HELL
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by waos on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 05:18:44 PM AEST
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| i went through something almost exactly like your poem describes, the similarities are...wow. yeah...thanks for posting this. |
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Re: ENVOKING MY OWN HELL
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by diamond_tears on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 06:19:34 PM AEST
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loved this. i think a lot of people like me can relate. pm me wen u get a chance!!
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Re: ENVOKING MY OWN HELL
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by Archie on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 07:01:28 PM AEST
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| Whoa, I'm glad you failed and I hope you don't try to kill your self again. I don't know what else to say except that. |
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Re: ENVOKING MY OWN HELL
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by lilch4ever on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 07:50:34 PM AEST
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| That was very very sad. Hope things are better now. Wish you all the luck and hugs all around. Good poem though. Such emotion and depth. Very good wonderfully written. |
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Re: ENVOKING MY OWN HELL
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by pixie on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 09:42:04 AM AEST
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this is trully amazing, i can relate to your words.
pixie xx |
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