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You're the reason why
Contributed by
Lovely_4_steve
on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 04:05:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I close my eyes, and wish I could die.
You hurt me and made me cry.
You pushed me to far you're the reason why I'm lying here dieing.
With all this pain flowing through my body.
I cried every night to get through to you,
you wouldn't listen.
You ignored me, pushed me away.
You told me we were through, you said we're over we're done, there is no us.
Only you
The first wrist slit was because the hurt you made me go through .
The second one was because I was pathetic enough to be with you and to put up with the ***** you put me through.
I hear my mothers screams at the door.
I try not to listen, I feel some one pick me up and put me on a bed.
I hear "She's fading fast."
I close my eyes tighter theres darkness.
I wake up in a cold dark room.
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Re: You're the reason why
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by betty on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 04:11:42 PM AEST
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Are all poets suicidal?
Not bad, it made feel mildly disturbed and sad.
is this a cry for help? |
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Re: You're the reason why
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by Archie on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 04:35:29 PM AEST
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| You write well. A word of advice, don't keep putting your self in situations with people you know are gonna hurt you. I don't want to get inspiration for poetry from my sadness; I hope you don't either. |
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Re: You're the reason why
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by Britty on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 04:58:05 PM AEST
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| this was a very good poem. Keep it up. |
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Re: You're the reason why
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by Trisha on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 09:43:49 PM AEST
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| I like but I don't want to read all suicidaled poems and you're good though |
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