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Epitaph of a Fallen Hero
Contributed by
forever_lonely
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Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 03:29:08 PM in AEST
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Entrapped a violent fire pregnant with the heat in which a fear of dying burns in the height of confusion
Each passing flame devours a memory derived from the regret of a child crying in the winds of time
Indelible memoria leaving a stain on my pride as each tear sheds a thousand years of pain from the death of my life
Tenacious in my dreams, each passing image like shackles on my wrists pulling at the thoughts that live so deep within
Epitaphs inscribed upon my chest, the sentence of a fallen hero in a prison of eluded ecstasy
To look for rest within each word, but to find a prism where each passing thought is split into a million more
As mirror of oblivion watches for perfection left only by the dreams of gods that sleep to live forever
Dreams that leave me dead and shackled by the truth that I will never rest from this eternal damnation that is death.
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Re: Epitaph of a Fallen Hero
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by alecfernadez on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 03:32:54 PM AEST
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| I liked this, its very passionate, and a powerful renosating poem. Well done |
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Re: Epitaph of a Fallen Hero
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by freespirit on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 03:47:56 PM AEST
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| well written I enjoyed reading this poem |
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Re: Epitaph of a Fallen Hero
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by betty on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 03:50:31 PM AEST
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| Beautiful. I see no room for improvement. Very moving. Impressive. |
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Re: Epitaph of a Fallen Hero
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by Rakerman1999 on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 04:35:06 PM AEST
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My friend, you write with such great emotion always, but this one is simply incredible. One for the ages in my opinion.
Barkeep......
Larry |
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Re: Epitaph of a Fallen Hero
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 04:57:36 PM AEST
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oh luke, this is brilliant! you have conveyed the feelings of hopelessness and dispair of imminant death, the thoughts running through their minds, so sad when firefighters are killed, this is beautifully written and a most excellent choice of words and images:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Epitaph of a Fallen Hero
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by grip-wth-broken-fingers on
Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 08:26:58 AM AEST
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| very good i like it very strong use of words and i liek ur style thank you xgripx |
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