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Upstream
Contributed by
Luinil
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Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 01:09:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Two steps closer, one step back
Rain falling harder and faster
No footholds in the mud covering the path
The only one going uphill
Dodging the rest in their descent
Every breath stinging deeply
Struggling, dragging heavy burden behind
Up and up, towards the top of the hill
Further and further away it grows
No one sees; no one hears
Close your eyes, take a breath
Remember what waits
Keep going
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Luinil
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2004-06-13 13:09:33]
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Re: Upstream
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by Archie on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 01:15:56 PM AEST
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This is an awesome poem,
"To have a heart that perserveres
is to have a piece of fire refined gold" |
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Re: Upstream
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by moon_light on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 01:36:10 PM AEST
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sad but varry up lifting
great wright |
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Re: Upstream
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by 01_zanzebar on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 02:08:16 PM AEST
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I share your sense of struggle, not because of peoples discimination, but the fact that i have incurable dyslexia and im currently at university, even when my primary school teachers said i'd be a waste of a test paper in an exam. keep up the good work.
'some people are bastards, because they can't get what you will acheive' |
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Re: Upstream
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by Princesaazul16 on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 02:08:41 PM AEST
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Beautiful! I loved it. I understand how you feel, keep up the good work.
~Stace~ |
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Re: Upstream
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 01:09:12 PM AEST
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a very positive poem:) hugs n' love nessa
@->>->:- |
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