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Molly's Lolly
Contributed by
Puppy
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Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 12:47:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
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There once was girl called Molly
Who loved to suck lollys
She sucked and sucked
She all ways had the best of luck
But in the end she was hit by a lorry.
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Puppy
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2004-06-13 12:47:03]
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Re: Molly's Lolly
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by bluedragonfly on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 01:53:52 PM AEST
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| yes, enjoyed your first one. I have to say this one is way different. Being unique is a good thing tho. |
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Re: Molly's Lolly
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by 01_zanzebar on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 02:18:34 PM AEST
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ooops, constructive crititism
ya might wanna go for more body to your poetry, but thats just my view, welcome and hope you have a good stay : )
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Re: Molly's Lolly
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 01:38:51 AM AEST
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lol! well done, these are so much harder than many know, hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Molly's Lolly
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by SweetRhythm on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 08:59:07 AM AEST
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ha! Funny little light-hearted poem! Not bad for first entry!
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Re: Molly's Lolly
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 4th July 2004 @ 04:27:01 AM AEST
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That was class! welcome to the ranks of the poetically insane!
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Re: Molly's Lolly
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 10:42:37 PM AEST
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| nice poem to start off with. =] |
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Re: Molly's Lolly
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 11th December 2005 @ 04:53:17 PM AEST
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Remember you reading this out to me
Come back to the site Charlotte!
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