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The game

Contributed by lil_angel_eyes on Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 12:03:54 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



This is the game
We played it this way
I refuse to let you
Hurt me today

Let play level one
You against me
You bought in a third person
But you didnt see

The hurt and he pain
It would eventually cause
Just as we get on
You decide to hit pause

lets play level two
A year and a half after waiting
Finally no more fighting
We begin to start dating

You said things would change
I dont know why
Why did I believe you
you didnt even try

Lets play level three
Once again we fight
Forgetting everything
That is wrong or right

You took my heart
you broke it in two
And you didnt care
what you put me through

lets play level four
now its my turn
Time to cause you pain
Time to make you learn

that before i was a pushover
But now im stronger
So im not taking this pain
or your hurt any longer

lets play level five
This is now my game
erase all my memorys
erase my name

I dont want to be in your life
or you in mine
because im much stronger
I know without you im fine

Lets play level six
this game I will end
Your no longer my lover
you dont act like a friend

I dont need this
I dont need what you say
your nothing to me
So be on your way

GAME OVER




Copyright © lil_angel_eyes ... [ 2004-06-13 12:03:54]
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Re: The game (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 12:11:53 PM AEST
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wow this was amazing, one of the best i have read..... great work

pixie xx


Re: The game (User Rating: 1 )
by liquidsunshine on Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 12:39:10 PM AEST
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I really love this poem. You've got a great sense of storytelling instilled in it and the game aspect is really creative.

Great poem. Bravo and encore!!!

Lots of love and peace be with you,

Chelsea


Re: The game (User Rating: 1 )
by carmen_queasy on Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 01:07:50 PM AEST
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that was powerful, it made me smile.


Re: The game (User Rating: 1 )
by 01_zanzebar on Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 02:20:31 PM AEST
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Cracking stuff kiddeh, GAME OVER was a bit obscure in the context, less it is about love is a game, inwhich case, lol, well written




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