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When I See You Smile

Contributed by Archie on Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 11:18:30 AM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics



(Introduction)
The world is such a grandios creation
Colors brighten up our dim heart's vision
The birds make nests up in the trees for summer
The squirrels gather chestnuts happily for the winter
And the sunlight of the sunrise
brings new strength
It's viewing is from God above a gift
The gentle breeze
with all of its sensations
is your smile
Life is your smile

(Verses)
When I see you smile
the world becomes a brand new place
and not so much of a rat race
where people lack devotion for each other

When I see you smile
The mumblecrusts are given bread
and every child his proper care
The rich and wealthy voluteer to share

(Chorus)
And the world is not a pungant place to live
For the Creator has taught us how to give
(and we are all a progeny of him)
I see so clearly his vision
For he has removed the prism
I view it when I see you smile.

When I see you smile
The wars and threats are gone away
no grieving one to mourn o're graves
Every person lives in utter peace

Even though the world is not like that right now
Theres a hope I see that in your heart abounds
If everyone just did his part
Choose freely to lift up one heart
It's so sad that only a few look to see
you smile





Copyright © Archie ... [ 2004-06-13 11:18:30]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: When I See You Smile (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 11:26:18 AM AEST
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Lovely

Shari


Re: When I See You Smile (User Rating: 1 )
by Overstated on Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 11:40:29 AM AEST
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beautiful just beautiful!!! superbly wrote

- you are one of the most gifted songwriters i've read so far on YPDC.


Re: When I See You Smile (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 11:54:53 AM AEST
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wow, this is great, I normally don't read the song lyrics, but I thought I would and I am very impressed

pixie xx


Re: When I See You Smile (User Rating: 1 )
by Luinil on Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 12:07:21 PM AEST
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very beautifully written *


Re: When I See You Smile (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 12:08:06 PM AEST
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Impressive!!! I love this....
Hugs
Jenni


Re: When I See You Smile (User Rating: 1 )
by carmen_queasy on Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 12:46:14 PM AEST
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that was beautiful


Re: When I See You Smile (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy on Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 01:08:52 PM AEST
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I found this poem quite sad this poem is beautfully written

Puppy :)


Re: When I See You Smile (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 03:44:41 PM AEST
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very well written archie!! simply beautiful!! i love the nature aspect:) hugs n' love nessa

@->>->:-


Re: When I See You Smile (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 04:47:49 PM AEST
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I think of smiles as a tiny bit of love from your heart that you share with the world. There is nothing more beautiful than a heartfelt smile shared with others. They can light up the darkest hour.

Rita


Re: When I See You Smile (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 04:48:25 PM AEST
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You are a masterful song writer sir,
my hat's off to ya.
Very well done
Larry


Re: When I See You Smile (User Rating: 1 )
by Ethereal_Engine on Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 08:02:46 PM AEST
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Wow that was really pretty. Its amazing how something as simple as a smile from a loved one can take away all pain, suffering, and crap that we all have to put up with. You have some very nice visuals hear, in the beginning especially with all the nature scenery. Heh I don't like the term comment, I like the idea of a review, you know offer feedback and tell a tale perhaps. I'm new here and prefer to treat this site like Acid Planet, where I post my music and will follow my policy of Review=Review ^^. Thanks for your "comments" lol on Terra.


Re: When I See You Smile (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 09:28:39 PM AEST
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To me there is something disarming and mesmerizing in an honest smile. I can't help but smile myself.

This was a treat to read. You wrote it so well and it is something to be proud of.



Re: When I See You Smile (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 04:44:21 AM AEST
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Awww.. I love the beauty of nature..you have done a wonderful job..this is very sweet and beautiful. venkat


Re: When I See You Smile (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 02:54:16 PM AEST
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I like this, too. It's like listening to my Christian Radio station---both beautiful and uplifting. I must try to fit in more time for reading. I'm missing on some good stuff here.
Stitch




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