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The end.
Contributed by
kittiekat
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Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 11:14:08 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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The many years dredded across my face
Slashed with anguish and regretfulness
Days that feel like an eternity dragged down on your shoulders like heavy rocks
Each fall I command
It ripples the scars on my knees and bleeds with no where to go
The red paint on my skin that was felt against my leathery hand
Hits me like a brick wall
Injuring my healing and weakened soul
The chambered heart locked away in it's misery
Tears fallen down the crystal river which leds the way
The way to darkness and the past
Once you step into it and sink down the tainted quick sand
You may never exile from the tortures it has contained inside
Open up and see how the experiences would led to such a thing
Take curiosity and give it a shot at the game
..Go to the dangered path which I'll limber the sights ..
Copyright ©
kittiekat
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2004-06-13 11:14:08]
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Re: The end.
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by betty on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 11:18:02 AM AEST
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I liked it.
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Re: The end.
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by Archie on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 11:22:41 AM AEST
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| Good poem make sure you check your spelling before posting though. |
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Re: The end.
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by pixie on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 11:55:47 AM AEST
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very well done to you, loved it
pixie xx |
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