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Tear Touched Flower
Contributed by
Overstated
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Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 10:57:21 AM in AEST
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Intensifying and shimmering at your own discretion,
So beautiful so slender,
Untouched for a thousand years you lye here amid the sway,
Near your friends near your wave.
Blowing with the ocean breeze toasting the air,
Feeding honey bee addicts feeding continuation,
You’re as Sweet as candy just wafting through the atmospheres,
More beautiful than a thousand cars more beautiful than all my years,
The scars of our earth are repelled by you Tear Touched Flower,
So gentle so burly,
You testify for all that is natural, for all that rises and shines,
This is for all that you leave behind; this is for all that fails to be defined,
Tear Touched Flower grow everlastingly.
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Overstated
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2004-06-13 10:57:21]
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Re: Tear Touched Flower
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by arden on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 11:05:01 AM AEST
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Beyond beautiful. your use of words flowed so wonderfully. you have a great talent.
5 stars.
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Re: Tear Touched Flower
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by Archie on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 11:28:05 AM AEST
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| This is a great poem and I wonder what exactly are you talking about a person of a place, maybe a thing what ever it is you did a great job. |
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by RockNwhls on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 11:41:41 AM AEST
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| incredible imagery! |
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Re: Tear Touched Flower
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 11:42:41 AM AEST
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Stunning piece of work. This is absolutely delightful.
Rita |
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Re: Tear Touched Flower
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by pixie on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 11:56:45 AM AEST
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this is wonderful, beautiful and such a pleasure to read
5/5
pixie xx |
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Re: Tear Touched Flower
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by Puppy on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 01:17:58 PM AEST
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Beautful!
Puppy :) |
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Re: Tear Touched Flower
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 03:49:18 PM AEST
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very pretty!! hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Tear Touched Flower
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by blueheart on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 09:55:23 PM AEST
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Delightful, absolutely delightful.
I adore the title of your poem.
Truly a work of art. |
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Re: Tear Touched Flower
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by TheNextRobertFrost on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 05:36:23 PM AEST
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Very imaginative. Great job!
T A. B |
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Re: Tear Touched Flower
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 15th August 2004 @ 03:13:31 PM AEST
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This was extremely beautiful.... I loved it...
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Re: Tear Touched Flower
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by PumpkinPie on
Tuesday, 17th August 2004 @ 08:12:19 PM AEST
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Oh wow ! This was a really touching piece,so well written and original;this poem truly defines your talent.~1000+ stars~
PumpkinPie |
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Re: Tear Touched Flower
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by thumper on
Saturday, 25th September 2004 @ 07:54:41 AM AEST
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Beautifully sweet. Great emotion. I have photos of roses with just one dew drop on them that would fit this poem perfectly! Kudos!
Thumps ; 0) |
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Re: Tear Touched Flower
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by Monkeybones99 on
Monday, 6th February 2006 @ 06:29:56 PM AEST
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| Good poem like they way the tear touched flower doesn't necessarily represent a flower. |
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