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Steve The Theater Porter…
Contributed by
deathdrop
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Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 08:24:58 AM in AEST
Topic:
dedicatedpoems
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When I was,
In hospital.
I saw some one there,
That was just so cool!
He was a theater porter,
Nothing much.
But his whole stile,
Seemed to reach out and touch.
He had his nurses uniform in a,
Dark, grass, shade of green.
He had a smiley face,
With a frown of un-ease.
But apparently,
It’s his look,
When he’s happy.
He had big tattoos down both his arms!
But I must admit, it did make me laugh.
‘Coz he’s the first ever porter, I’ve seen like that!
It’s like seeing a middle-aged doctor, with a base-ball cap.
And I ain’t ripping it! I think his look rocks!!!!
But I guess it’s just as well, be didn’t have batman socks!
And as for his hair, it was all pushed back.
He had long side-burns, and his hair is black.
Apparently his nickname is “Elvis”. ‘Coz he has a small quiff.
I just think he could have made a better job.
Then pushed beds round to theater, list after list.
I was talking to ‘John’ a security guard.
Asking if he knew him.
That’s how I found out Steve’s name.
I guess it’s just a pity I never spoke to him.
So, just for Steve,
I’ll dedicate the poem to him!
‘Coz I think he just looks so wicked,
It’s the least I could do for him.
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deathdrop
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Re: Steve The Theater Porter…
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by Avarice_Riot on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 08:50:31 AM AEST
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| Lol, you should show him this poem, I'm sure he'd be really surprised. I loved reading this, it was highly entertaining and a nice tribute. |
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Re: Steve The Theater Porter…
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by Overstated on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 11:07:42 AM AEST
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| lovely descriptive piece quite diary like - really good poem!!! |
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Re: Steve The Theater Porter…
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by RockNwhls on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 11:22:18 AM AEST
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love the phrasing. great style!!
scarlett |
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Re: Steve The Theater Porter…
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by Luinil on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 12:10:20 PM AEST
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| awesome... great style! |
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Re: Steve The Theater Porter…
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by buchi on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 01:08:34 PM AEST
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| Steve stirred up your poetic creativity and did he read this!! |
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