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Crimson Sky, Never Goodbye
Contributed by
steven_fenton1982
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Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 08:06:20 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I don't want to follow in your footsteps.
I don't need to breathe the air you breathe.
I don't want to stare the colour from your iris,
to fall into the dark endless void of your eyes
I don't want to walk in your shadow,
and, I don't need to live in your light.
I don't want to be born in your dreams,
to live inside your nightmares, and die in your mind.
Maybe I'm just an insignificant life form,
just a meager, incomplete man.
Bounded by your hypnotizing stare,
imprisoned by your counterfeit charm.
Prayers of love, laced with poison.
Lips of deceit, my pseudo goodnight kiss from you.
Promises of faith, drowned in paraffin.
Words of allure, my only salvation from the flames.
Crimson sky, never goodbye.
Copyright ©
steven_fenton1982
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2004-06-13 08:06:20]
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Re: Crimson Sky, Never Goodbye
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by ESM on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 08:22:43 AM AEST
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| Not as good as mine! |
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Re: Crimson Sky, Never Goodbye
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by deathdrop on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 08:29:18 AM AEST
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brilliant title!!!!!!!
i love this one.
and you should too. don't worry about what any one else says! |
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Re: Crimson Sky, Never Goodbye
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by Avarice_Riot on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 08:41:48 AM AEST
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| Empowering in a way. Hope you succeed in your journey to become your own person. |
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Re: Crimson Sky, Never Goodbye
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by shelby on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 08:19:54 PM AEST
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this is lovely
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