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Step Into My World
Contributed by
tamilyn
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Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 07:51:52 AM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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Step into my world with me and wonder
Witness all the beauty that I see
Cast your doubts and fears on me to ponder
No remorse you shall receive from me
Waltz into my dreams and wake my conscience
Ask of me, what dost thy need to know
I will speak the truth, of this I promise
From my lips my honesty shall flow
Walk with me through meadows of forever
Vivid color dancing round our feet
Shades of love forever wrapped together
Prisms of our personalities
Step into my world with me and wonder
Witness all the beauty that I see
Cast your doubts and fears on me to ponder
I will take your heart and rescue thee
Copyright: Tammy Hendershot
2004
Copyright ©
tamilyn
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2004-06-13 07:51:52]
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Re: Step Into My World
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by deathdrop on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 08:39:40 AM AEST
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it is a nice little poem and i'll give you that, i'm just not this type of writing, though some parts are simpy beauitful!
this is a warm poem.
i am a dark person... but i found this alright.
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Re: Step Into My World
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 11:11:27 AM AEST
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You always have a lovely way with words. I am in admiration of this piece. Like deathdrop says, it's very 'warm'. I'd add 'iridescent' and 'absorbing', for good measure.
Enchating write. |
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Re: Step Into My World
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by pixie on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 11:39:41 AM AEST
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wonderful peom,
pixie xx |
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