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A Tear To End
Contributed by
Buggsy
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Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 07:24:26 AM in AEST
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With the past returned,
The pain of a life once lived,
To cry one last tear.
Copyright ©
Buggsy
... [
2004-06-13 07:24:26]
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Re: A Tear To End
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by Avarice_Riot on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 07:45:14 AM AEST
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| Intriguing piece, so few words but so much emotion. |
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Re: A Tear To End
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by arden on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 10:54:18 AM AEST
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i agree with the above comment.
a wonderful and sad piece.
nicely done.
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Re: A Tear To End
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 10:54:59 AM AEST
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Nice haiku.... loved it...
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Re: A Tear To End
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 6th August 2004 @ 12:13:16 AM AEST
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| amazing haiku. |
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Re: A Tear To End
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by Buggsy on
Monday, 20th September 2004 @ 11:19:02 PM AEST
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