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Don't Judge Us, Just By Lookig At Us!
Contributed by
deathdrop
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Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 07:08:35 AM in AEST
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Black Hair nice and smooth,
Up in a half pony tail.
Eye make-up nice and black,
With no dusty trails.
Skin sweet and soft,
With barely any spots.
But, don’t use white foundation,
When I wanna Goth.
Short black lacey tops,
Or soft long-sleeved/ dark colour streamed ones.
Skirts/ hoodies/ big boots,
Black trousers/ or normal skater shoes.
Black or purple,
Sharp and long nails,
To make me look,
Abnormal.
I don’t wanna be a towney.
Coz personally I see them as sheep’s.
Being a Goth makes nothing rule me,
I wear what I like --- HEY! I’m not dissing my community!
Some people look at us lot,
And then they start to judge.
Why should our clothes rule our personality?
So don’t treat us like sludge!
I know some with piercings,
That are totally cool people.
I know others with full Goth make-up,
That aren’t evil!
So next time you see one or some, of us.
Walking down the street,
Please don’t turn up your nose.
Just except them as a human being!!!
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deathdrop
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2004-06-13 07:08:35]
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Re: Don't Judge Us, Just By Lookig At Us!
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by lostinmyself on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 07:17:09 AM AEST
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I too am sick of being judged by the way i look.
This is a good write. A few spelling mistakes, but overall very good.
*hugs*
Phil xxx |
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Re: Don't Judge Us, Just By Lookig At Us!
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by Merry on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 07:21:13 AM AEST
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EXCELLENT - this made me smile and reminded me of when I was a teenager - way back in the hippy days and we got treated the same way, being called "dirty hippies" and worse. Enjoy being just the way you are and never change.
Hugs
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Re: Don't Judge Us, Just By Lookig At Us!
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by Avarice_Riot on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 09:26:34 AM AEST
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| I hear ya loud and clear, I hate being judged by glances and looks. This is an empowering poem, go you;) |
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Re: Don't Judge Us, Just By Lookig At Us!
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by pixie on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 11:10:23 AM AEST
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Great poem, I get stared at because I have a few tattoos on my arms and it is still considered acceptable for a man to have as many as I do but a woman gets frowned upon Grrrrrr makes me so mad!!!!
Really liked your poem,
pixie xx |
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Re: Don't Judge Us, Just By Lookig At Us!
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by deadbloodyrose on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 11:24:42 AM AEST
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| if only more peopel could be like this and not judge someone based on their outter appearance.. our world would be such a better place.. AMI JO |
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Re: Don't Judge Us, Just By Lookig At Us!
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by Silent-No-More on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 02:16:26 PM AEST
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| Ohhh... good job! You made your point well! I enjoyed this.... keep 'em coming! |
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Re: Don't Judge Us, Just By Lookig At Us!
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by screwup on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 04:39:30 PM AEST
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| I really like this poem...it makes perfect sense. I hate when people stare at me for the way I look just because I wear all black and stuff. and I also hate people going around saying "goth girl". you really got the point across with your poem, good job. |
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