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Dreading Thrice
Contributed by
frejya
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Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 05:40:07 AM in AEST
Topic:
toughstuff
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Many times more than twice
I've entered my hell of lies
To hear my cries in paradise
Not renovation, not reincarnation
'Cause it's the soul who dies
And my heartbeat never precise
Though I've lost me more that twice
This feeling my hunger, this feeling my rice
After all these tries
I'm still forced to arise
Don't want no more, not more than twice
I give up, I give in
Begging to see the day my soul flies
Like a slave I kneal before my lies
If and only if I'm still alive
What if otherwise?
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frejya
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2004-06-13 05:40:07]
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Re: Dreading Thrice
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by faithmairee on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 05:52:01 AM AEST
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A magnificent poem with great depth. very profound...i loved it!
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Re: Dreading Thrice
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by lostinmyself on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 06:12:21 AM AEST
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i like this...i cant grasp the meaning, but im tired. lol.
i like these lines:
" Begging to see the day my soul flies
Like a slave I kneal before my lies"
they stand out. good write.
phil xxx
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Re: Dreading Thrice
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by deathdrop on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 06:44:55 AM AEST
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i found this confusig in my first read, but after my second i found i understood it.
this is great!
what isn't is the way you're feeling.
i hope you find your way out soon! |
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Re: Dreading Thrice
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by Archie on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 06:57:32 AM AEST
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| The poem is not too hard to understand or atleast I don't think so. |
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