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Jealousy
Contributed by
bluedragonfly
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Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 02:31:50 AM in AEST
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All around her
Jealousy and mistrust
She doesn't know
Who she can trust
She hears the whispers
Behind her back
Alot of things
In a minute
She would take back
Jealousy is from
The root of evil
Let us not
Forget
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2004-06-13 02:31:50]
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Re: Jealousy
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by Avarice_Riot on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 04:01:00 AM AEST
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| True, very true....I wouldn't want to destroy myself because of a petty green envy. |
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Re: Jealousy
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by deadbloodyrose on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 11:20:15 AM AEST
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| i really like this poem.. you describe it so well.. AMI JO |
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Re: Jealousy
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by sunnyrainbows on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 12:44:05 AM AEST
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i like this topic of jealousy..
but maybe for your 2nd adn 4th line you shouldn't rhyme with the same word? cause i's repetitive with "trust" rhyming with "trust".
=)
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Re: Jealousy
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by slim on
Sunday, 14th August 2005 @ 07:51:53 AM AEST
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| First off, thank you for commenting on my first song I posted. It meant a lot to me. Secondly, I really like the theme of jealousy you chose to write about because it really is evil and can bring a relationship down. I know I would take back a lot of silly things I've done or said because of jealousy. This is a very nice poem. |
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