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All In One Moment
Contributed by
bluedragonfly
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Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 02:12:35 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Their lives changed
All in one moment
He was ripped
From her heart
Her world once again
All torn apart
Now she longs to see
That sparkle in his eyes
The way only he
Looked at her
To feel
His lips upon hers
The taste
Of his kiss
To feel
His touch upon her
Burning
Once again
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2004-06-13 02:12:35]
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Re: All In One Moment
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 03:33:03 AM AEST
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hello
great poem.i realy liked it,i like the way you write and i've liked your poems u've written,thanks for sharing.this is a very deep and heart touching poem.
love always,
Andrea |
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Re: All In One Moment
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by Avarice_Riot on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 04:05:07 AM AEST
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| Heartache and longing bleed from this piece.....very nicely written, well done. |
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Re: All In One Moment
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by pixie on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 11:05:20 AM AEST
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liked this alot, it was very well expressed,
pixie xx |
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