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July
Contributed by
FiggySue
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Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 12:31:40 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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The snow is falling on my heart,
The wind so strong, it tears me apart.
The ice is hanging over my head,
a still reminder of what's been said.
The sky's as gray as the look in your eye,
as you told me "this is goodbye".
It's always cold this time of year,
and the memories remain so clear.
I question myself why o' why?
why did he say goodbye?
why must it be July.?
Why must there always be July?
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FiggySue
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2004-06-13 00:31:40]
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Re: July
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by Colleen on
Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 10:08:00 PM AEST
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| That was a really amazing poem! I love the way you used the month to relate to how you felt. I am sorry about your heartbreak! |
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Re: July
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by Pyrofungus on
Monday, 20th September 2004 @ 05:49:53 PM AEST
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amazing job...
please comment on my work too
summer |
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