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Sijo II
Contributed by
ramfire
on
Wednesday, 16th October 2002 @ 11:45:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Hawk sails the sky with grace and ease.
Bird plays the currents ever free.
It makes the flowing gentle breeze
to take him soaring high to see
if wee small prey will try to hide.
There's no escape - that scheme's been tried.
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ramfire
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2002-10-16 11:45:00]
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Re: Sijo II
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by Daniel on
Friday, 1st November 2002 @ 02:58:49 AM AEST
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| short but sweet... i'm wondering what sijo means but i think that's besides the point. good write ramfire! kudos! ;0) -daniel |
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Re: Sijo II
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by Ramfire on
Saturday, 2nd November 2002 @ 07:00:21 AM AEST
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Sijo is a kind of Japanese poetry. What it means, I don't know. Some other kinds of Japanese poetry are:Haiku, Lantern, Senyru.
Each kind has its own sentence structure and meter to follow. I'm glad you like this poem. I hope I can write another one you'll like too.
Regards,
Ramfire |
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