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Hate You and Love You
Contributed by
Savannah
on
Wednesday, 16th October 2002 @ 11:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
MiscPoems
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Sometimes I hate you
Hate you like blood from a porcelain wrist
Freshly slit open
Hate you like a river created by salt tears
Falling from all the broken eyes in the world
Hate you like a new glass statue crashing
And breaking into tiny pieces with a big clatter
Hate you like a match meeting gasoline
And exploding into a beautiful terrible fire ball
Hate you like your favorite song starting softly
And growing louder til it hurts ears to listen
But sometimes I love you
Love you like a dive into a cool look
On a hot summer day
Love you like a dance with Mr. Right
Under the stars on a warm spring night
Love you like an ice cream binge
With best friends after you've been dumped
Love you like falling asleep on someones lap
After a night spent laughing and smiling
Love you like dancing in the rain at midnight
With music so soft only you can hear it
Love you like I hate you
And hate you like I love you
Copyright ©
Savannah
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2002-10-16 11:30:00]
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Re: Hate You and Love You
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by Wrybod on
Monday, 13th January 2003 @ 07:18:42 PM AEST
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Savannah, really enjoyed being taken back to
my youth again. . Sharp, vivid, wild.
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Re: Hate You and Love You
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by Wrybod on
Monday, 13th January 2003 @ 07:22:38 PM AEST
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Savannah, really enjoyed being taken back to
my youth again. . Sharp, vivid, painfull, exstatic,
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Re: Hate You and Love You
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by Arwen on
Friday, 31st January 2003 @ 09:44:11 AM AEST
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| very vividly expressed, u truly have magnificent talent and you've learnt to wield it well for one so young. thanx for sharing this one with us. |
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