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Untitled
Contributed by
despised_freak
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Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 10:23:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Left alone
Not a sound
The silence is deafening
Bound by things she can not hide
She can't defend herself from the demons within
She needs somebody to save her from this life of sin
She struggles to pursue happiness
Her morbid thoughts are sheer bliss
Crimson thoughts of suicide
She smiled and then sighed
She wants to die but death scares her
Her vision is blurred
She needs somebody to help her see
Make things right
And set her free
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2004-06-12 22:23:25]
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Re: Untitled
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by MrMojoRisin on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 10:28:14 PM AEST
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| I truly enjoyed that one. I aslo write more dark poetry than happy love crap, and usally under some "influence" during bouts of depression. Keep writing, it helps. |
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Re: Untitled
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by hobbitess on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 10:32:51 PM AEST
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I like this poem because it it is a perfect description of how I feel sometimes. I like writing poetry when I'm depressed for some strange reason it cheers me up.
'Crimson thoughts of suicide' I like this line best.
Good work |
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Re: Untitled
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 10:52:31 PM AEST
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this reminds me a lot of me...lol but I have tried suiced...im not scared of death I just realize now that Im better than that...the girl in the story is better than that...well great write...
much love,
Dani |
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by pixie on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 10:55:18 AM AEST
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Great poem, I usually write alot of dark poetry... keep em coming
pixie xx |
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Re: Untitled
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by deadbloodyrose on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 11:11:58 AM AEST
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| i can completely relate to this.. and i really like how u wrote it.. AMI JO |
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