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Would you care?
Contributed by
Kie-Kie
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Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 10:14:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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I thought my friends were true
But they just make me blue
Secrets told behind my back?
I'm tellllin' you that's just wack
Have I ever given you a reason not to trust?
I never spilled your secrets of hate or lust
You were the ones I trusted most
But are my feelings like a ghost?
You didn't see, nor think, nor care
But when you were upset I was there
So if I died right here, right now
If after this poem was my final bow
Would you have noticed?
Would you have cared?
Or were we friends because you were dared?
I may not live as long as you
But at least I can say, as a friend, I was true
I never spoke about you, never left you out
I always showed you kindness; what friendship's all about
These secrets that you kept from me
Hurt worse than insults from an enemy
So I ask you once again
Would you care if I were dead?
Copyright ©
Kie-Kie
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2004-06-12 22:14:37]
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Re: Would you care?
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by Kie on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 10:21:55 PM AEST
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Initially I read this poem bec. you have the same name as I do. It is odd in a way bec. I never knew there was another Kie on the site. Anyway...
Lots of anger in this poem. You have a writing ability and I see it in your words. The good friendships won't leave you feeling this way and I hope you find a great friend one day who isn't the way you described in your poem.
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Re: Would you care?
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 10:33:02 PM AEST
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WOW!!! you tell me you didn think that your poems were good...thats b-s lol honestly this one was filled with a lot of anger and hatred toward your "friends" I hope I wasnt one you hated...lol but yeah this was has a lot of emotion and feling in it that makes it powerful...I loved it...
much love,
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Re: Would you care?
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by Trisha on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 11:08:04 PM AEST
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| Nices |
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Re: Would you care?
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by pixie on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 10:54:20 AM AEST
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Great poem, you have a real talent
pixie xx |
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Re: Would you care?
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by Stonedraider23 on
Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 11:45:22 PM AEST
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| great write i dont have many friend that i can call good friend so yea never really had the problem |
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