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Tears of Love
Contributed by
Just2cute
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Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 09:18:41 PM in AEST
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When I see how happy you are without me I always wonder, how could that be? I'm really glad that you found someone new For in your heart, what you two share is true
I just really wanted you to know The love I feel for you, I couldn't let go I know the circumstances I must face So I will move on, but at my own pace
Now that you're gone I realize I was wrong You say you're not coming back Is that your opinion or a fact?
Holding back all my fears Which break me down into tears The tears I cry at night Holding them back with all my might
Things between us ended to fast We kinda felt things wouldn't last All the things above, are called Tears of Love
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Re: Tears of Love
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by RhythmBndt on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 09:40:42 PM AEST
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| I've been there before :( *HUG* Great write. |
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Re: Tears of Love
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by Trisha on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 09:41:51 PM AEST
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| I Want To Be The First To Sign This Good Poem. Keep It Up. |
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Re: Tears of Love
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by KSUHO11 on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 10:12:41 PM AEST
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| I'm a guy, and that almost made me cry. I've been there as well so I feel ya. The emotion was there, pimp tight. |
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Re: Tears of Love
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by pixie on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 10:49:47 AM AEST
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great poem,
pixie xx |
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Re: Tears of Love
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by blueheart on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 09:30:01 PM AEST
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| Great write although I think you should write it in verses not all in a line. That way it'll be easier to read. |
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