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Amazed
Contributed by
juliette
on
Wednesday, 16th October 2002 @ 10:45:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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"Amazed"-
our song,
and I was
may still be,
but less,
so little
now.
"Amazed"
by the blue
of your eyes
and how quickly
they'd turn to grey
in the midst of unprovoked ire.
"Amazed"
at the gentle
tingle of your touch,
the butterflies born in my tummy,
and later-
the fear that lets you
tie it up in knots,
after the tenderness
becomes torrid and vile.
"Amazed"
that I am no good
to you now-
no good because
all those amazing
places,
feelings,
memories,
Evaporated into
my own tears shed,
and you forgot that you too,
were amazed.
Copyright ©
juliette
... [
2002-10-16 10:45:00]
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Re: Amazed
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by WordPoet on
Wednesday, 13th November 2002 @ 04:46:16 AM AEST
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| I don't think I've ever seen amazed used to represent such a sorrowful message before. I like the vivid self description and emotional representation of this poem. You've made your feelings quite clear. Good job. |
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Re: Amazed
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by Sarah22 on
Tuesday, 10th December 2002 @ 11:33:15 PM AEST
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this poem
is worth the
reading ciao for now. |
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