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what i deserve
Contributed by
im_sory_i_cant_be_perfect
on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 07:33:31 PM in AEST
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they don't remeber my name
they once made me happy
but now they give me pain
they said i was fine and just walked away
they don't know what i go through
for them every day
i am a loner yes it's true
i am a reject
and a loser too
i guess i've deserved this for so very long
but i don't recall what i did that was
that was so wrong
i told them how i felt
they ignored me
i thought they'd help
you got what you deserve
that's all they said
no i didn't
i deserve to be dead
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Re: what i deserve
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 09:46:57 PM AEST
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| for one thing you dont deserve to be dead. second, this is a good poem. third, friends and people are just materials that people have to make themselves feel better. people have lived with them and lived without them. they arent essential to live. forth, and if you dont like who you are, change it. |
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Re: what i deserve
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by Broken_Skin on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 03:28:01 PM AEST
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| :( i used to feel like this. what you need is to find love, some one who can love you. one DAY YOU'LL FIND IT. DONT LOOK FOR IT xx x |
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