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Don't
Contributed by
wolfwynd
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Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 05:25:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Don't
Don't turn around,
Because I can't bare to see
The look in your eyes
The one which says that you meant
Every word that you said to me last night
Don't say a word,
Because I won't be able to let you go
I don't know how I'm doing it now
Barely holding everything in
As I watch you go into the sunset for maybe the last time
Don't try to explain
Because I've heard it all before
How many times are you going to say you're sorry?
It says so much but means so little
Words of empty promises and shattered dreams
Don't try to make this easy
Because it isn't going to work this time,
I've been here too many times before,
Felt the sting of pain, the bitterness of tears,
The emptiness of love, once mutual, now unrequited,
As I try to move on once again
Copyright ©
wolfwynd
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2004-06-12 17:25:24]
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Re: Don't
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by Nightseer63 on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 05:27:50 PM AEST
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| Been here, often. |
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Re: Don't
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by holderofthestone on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 05:28:39 PM AEST
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| ya I know the feeling, its hard to let go and forget sometimes. another great poem I enjoy your writes. A++++ |
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Re: Don't
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by kimi on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 07:27:42 PM AEST
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| Happened many a time to me. Mostly the same guy too, not good....just one Q, how can it say "so much but mean so little"? In other words, what did u mean by this? Or did you simply do what i do often and write something coz it sounds nice?! lol...this does sound strangely like my stuff actually, you have a similar style to me...although yours is prob better than mine! xx |
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Re: Don't
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by brigitte7735 on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 08:01:18 PM AEST
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I'm loving you, you know that right?
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Re: Don't
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by Fionndruinne on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 02:07:23 AM AEST
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An old story, yet new every time. Well and gracefully written. This is good.
Take care now.
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Re: Don't
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by yellow_sundragon on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 05:42:34 PM AEST
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I've been there... it's funny how that word, sorry, can say so much, but after hearing it so many times, it means nothing..... I think you become numb to it....
Anyway, I really like your style...
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