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Pin Your Colours
Contributed by
wolfwynd
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Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 05:23:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Pin Your Colours
Tell me your fantasies, I'll tell you my dreams,
The start, the ends and all inbetweens,
Tell me your sorrows, I'll tell you my pain,
Pin your colours to the mast and I'll try to live again.
Tell me your temptations, I'll tell you my sin,
I'll tell you my weaknesses, I'll let you in,
I'll tell you my truths, you tell me your lies,
Pin you colours to the mast and I'll sever all ties
Tell me your thoughts, I'll tell you my fears,
My range of opinions formed over the years,
Tell me your secrets, I'll tell my desires,
Pin your colours to the mast and I'll extinguish old fires
Tell me your secrets, I'lll tell you my lies,
Pin your colours to the mast and I'll say my goodbyes...
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wolfwynd
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2004-06-12 17:23:57]
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Re: Pin Your Colours
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by holderofthestone on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 05:26:35 PM AEST
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very nice!! great flow and nice choice wording. great great poem! A++++
welcome to YPDC Ill be looking for more of your works, this one is impressive. Holder |
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Re: Pin Your Colours
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by brigitte7735 on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 07:54:18 PM AEST
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Wow...that brought up a very physical response....god I cant even tell you how much this means to me
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