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Fate Burped
Contributed by
Nightseer63
on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 05:11:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
HumorPoetry
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Fate pursed her lovely lips
took a breath of whipped abyss
She'd overindulged on some bliss
the burp she gave was like a kiss
Out you popped with a perfect twist.
Words can't really describe
what the angels had in mind
Perhaps to conjure up perfection
but now you're lost in your reflection
Hey there, ho there pretty eyes
can't you see past your own prize
This girl wants to get with ya
but your head's too swelled to fit ya
I'm not a super model or a doll
what makes me think you'd even call?
Gotta get out of this meat market,
find a nice guy sit n' park it
Dating sucks and I so hate it
Whadda ya mean you're not my blind date?
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Nightseer63
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2004-06-12 17:11:50]
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Re: Fate Burped
(User Rating: 1 )
by arden on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 05:48:46 PM AEST
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lol ok then..Very interesting lol
had a nice good flow to it. very entertaining lol.
i liked it. keep it up.
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Re: Fate Burped
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by xxbreathlessx on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 07:45:55 PM AEST
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| lmao i liked it..even tho i didnt get the "whadday mean ur not my blind date" part..maybe its me and my blondeness lol but other than tht i enojyed it great job |
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