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Frozen moment
Contributed by
holderofthestone
on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 04:51:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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capture my
hearts attention
frozen moment
time suspension
blazing eyes
burning through
all thougths
thrown askew
longing towards
your embrace
precious lips
calmng face
bodies warmth
souls fire
you've become
blinding desire
graceful angel
standing here
cannot speak
only stare
wishing this
moment lasts
praying it
never past
time reflows
starts again
I need
deep within
your loves
tight grasp
nothings said
you pass
by me
hearts broke
nothing done
nothing spoke
to afaid
I'll ruin
this moment
in you
I just
step aside
mesmorized by
angelic stride
I shouldnt
but alas
let your
love pass
you fade
in crowds
my heart
screams aloud
I regret
nothing done
angelic grace
forever gone
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2004-06-12 16:51:16]
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Re: Frozen moment
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 05:07:48 PM AEST
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like any other one of your pieces..I dont htink you can write a bad piece...I loved this one...very sweet, and touching but sad...Im sorry nothing happened...I loved it very good write....lots of emotiona dn feeling very powerful
much love,
Dani
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Re: Frozen moment
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by wolfwynd on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 05:40:36 PM AEST
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| I've been here... I understand somewhat of what I perseve you may have been going through at the time. Good write - keep up the good work! x |
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Re: Frozen moment
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by Overstated on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 06:26:15 PM AEST
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| an unusal poem - really enoyed reading this - some real em,otion at the core of this poem - nice work!!!! |
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Re: Frozen moment
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 09:31:31 PM AEST
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Those moments can be so difficult. I do have moments though I have frozen in my mind that are wonderful and I relieve them again and again. I wish for you happier moments in life and love.
Rita |
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Re: Frozen moment
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by lovingcritters on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 10:58:05 PM AEST
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Wow, I really liked this one. I like the way it was written too! Short and to the point. Frozen moments.....never thought of them in that way.......but is so true.......frozen in our minds for all eternity!
Splendid way of putting it........made me think?
love
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Re: Frozen moment
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by wray on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 09:09:10 AM AEST
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Your technique's very effective here, this was heaps fun to read :)
Favourite:
capture my
hearts attention
frozen moment
time suspension
Really did capture my attention! |
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Re: Frozen moment
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by MDodgen on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 01:48:55 PM AEST
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| i love the style like always, your word choice is superb. the imagery is amazing. good job. 5 stars. |
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Re: Frozen moment
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by Calista on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 01:42:59 AM AEST
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ohh, this reminds me of a time I had a similar feeling. like a once in a lifetime opportunity-i suppose you could call it love, or lust, at first sight. you captured the moving moment wonderfully. once again, i am in awe. thank you,
~Calista |
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