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On StarLace Wings
Contributed by
Nightseer63
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Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 04:49:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
mystical
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On StarLace Wings my heart rides
behind dark clouds his face hides
I know I'll know him already do
for lifetimes past now our bodies new
My white knight in a Subaru
He'll be here, any day
I know it- it just can't be any other way
What if he called and I wasn't home?
if I love him should he stay alone?
Too much stress to think about
I think I'm better off without.
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Nightseer63
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2004-06-12 16:49:09]
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Re: On StarLace Wings
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by lil_angel on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 05:01:18 PM AEST
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| awwwwww this is sooooooooooo sweet very good job! |
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Re: On StarLace Wings
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by arden on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 05:50:51 PM AEST
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i think this was very sad. very heartfelt and touching. this was a beautiful write.
i enjoyed it.
perfectly done.
Arden |
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