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Short poem 1
Contributed by
01_zanzebar
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Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 04:25:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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As we are just ships that pass in the foggy cold night
Opon My tear-drop ocean caused by your sadness
no-way can my green sea's turn that deeper blue
Having to die alone, without you
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01_zanzebar
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2004-06-12 16:25:23]
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Re: Short poem 1
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 04:32:44 PM AEST
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sometimes the less words yused the more easier it is to understand the topi of discussion...that was a great porm ...lots of emotion and feeling making it a powerful short piece...
I loved it
read and comment my stuff if you want, Id love to hear what you think...
much love,
Dani
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Re: Short poem 1
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 12:36:29 AM AEST
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| i agree with dani, excellent write. |
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