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Why didn't it work?
Contributed by
saveMEfromMYSELF
on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 04:02:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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The only time I got the courage,
It went into the toilet.
That taste I taste even now.
Oh, how it burnt my nose.
Why couldn't I have sucked it up
and used a knife!
Sure pain hurts
But only for a second!
Why did I have to be such a wus,
And be my human self for once.
Because my road hasn't ended.
That's all I can guess.
I hate taking pills now,
Or going into the bathroom.
All for fear it'll be in the toilet again.
I guess for me, it didn't work.
What's in store for me looks regretable,
It's good I didn't die though,
There's obviously someone that needs me still.
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Re: Why didn't it work?
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by Archie on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 04:15:54 PM AEST
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| That was an interesting write, I look forward to reading more of this story sometime soon. |
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Re: Why didn't it work?
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 04:25:16 PM AEST
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wow that was a unique write...I know the feeling that girl is going through...it was a great write...I loved it...keep it coming keep it up
much love,
Dani
please read and comment my stuff if you want Id love to hear what you think... |
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Re: Why didn't it work?
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by waos on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 08:49:08 PM AEST
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| that's good. really good. i like that your writing a story and stuff...i luv writing and i would luv to be able to get the courage up to write a whole novel. all the power to ya...good write |
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