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THE MESS IN MY MIND
Contributed by
tawakwan
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Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 03:30:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
psychoticpoems
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There seems to be complexity within the labyrinth of my confusion.
The disorganization causes a mish-mash in the litter as the whole mess begins to get scrambled.
There's no peace at the Donnybrook fair and pandemonium begins to rock the boat.
My mind is in an uproar and there's a riot in the jungle.
The whirlwinds kick up the devil as the wheels within wheels raise the roof over my head.
The anarchy is misplaced and I'm running out of steam..........................................
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tawakwan
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2004-06-12 15:30:23]
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Re: THE MESS IN MY MIND
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by Avila on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 04:02:04 PM AEST
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you have a very unique style
of writting I really enjoyed this poem
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Re: THE MESS IN MY MIND
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by faithmairee on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 04:04:13 PM AEST
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Nessa-This is absolutely awesome...you are a great poetess, my friend.
Hugs-Faith |
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